F2F Class Notes _24th May (Harmony) [2]

2: Usage: review + story + main errors (story focus on vocab)

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I came back from Thailand on 22nd and now I will writing about this trip’s harvests. This time I went there with my old sister, we went a few areas of Thailand and their names are Bangkok, Pattaya and Phuket. Bangkok is in central Thailand and is Thailand’s capital. It is a international city like Shanghai but Shanghai is more flourishing than Bangkok. It’s very flourishing in Pattaya’s  late night and there are a lot of bars where you can drink wine or coffee with watching ladyboys’ show. My favorite area is Phuket, it’s an island  ** on this island I got a scuba diving in the sea and I saw a lot of kinds of fish and coral.  Then we ate some seafood like oysters, lobsters and crabs. Unfortunately after eating lobsters I got a sore under my tongue it’s very pain now.  So I can just eat some bland food.  The scenery of Phuket is too beautiful to let you relaxing.  We did not stay in a hostel, we stayed in a 5 stars hotel, and from the widows I could see the whole swimming pool view.  And the hotel’s breakfast was a buffet which was fun and delicious.  When I went swimming I always had a floaty to relax on.  When we got into sea to scuba diving we should take an oxygen tank and face mask. 

Edited:

I came back from Thailand on the 22nd and now I will be writing about this trip’s highlights. This time I went there with my older sister. We went to a few areas around Thailand: Bangkok, Pattaya and Phuket. Bangkok is in central Thailand and it is the country’s capital. It is an international city like Shanghai but not quite as flourishing as Shanghai. Pattaya has a very exciting night life. There are a lot of bars where you can drink wine or coffee while watching the ladyboys’ show. My favorite area was Phuket, which is an island. On this island I went scuba diving in the Pacific Ocean and I saw a lot of kinds of fish and coral. Then we ate tons of seafood like oysters, lobsters and crabs. Unfortunately while eating lobsters I got a cut under my tongue which still hurts. (it’s very painful even now.) and means I can just eat bland food. The scenery of Phuket is too beautiful to let you relax. We did not stay in a hostel, we stayed in a 5-star hotel, and we had an amazing view of the swimming pool from our window. The hotel’s breakfast was buffet which was fun and diverse. When I went swimming I always had a floaty to relax on. When we got into the sea to scuba diving we had to take an oxygen tank and a face mask.

harvests (har -vists)

coral:  the rocky formations in the ocean, sometimes cool colors. 

sea anemone:  soft growths on a coral reef. 

eg.  Nemo lives in an anemone

** homework:  watch “Finding Nemo”***

tongue:  the muscle in your mouth.

bland:  no flavour, no harsh flavours.  (crackers/porridge/ plain bread)