F2F Class Notes 8th December (Celeste)***

Read the edited story below. Prepare to retell the story in your next class.

Write a story (150-250 words) about why you want to be a pianist. Upload your writing in your next class.

Original

Mercy and Reyes had a suspicious talk about when Reyes was dead on the battlefield, Mercy revied him and he killed her.
Maybe he afraid of Mercy tell her team members he was not dead , so he killed her.Let us talk about Reyes(AKA Azrael).
OW have a team member, his name is MORRISON(AKA soldier76). Reyes was his friend for a long time.They were OW’s secret service. They do some intelligence tasks. Reyes envy 76 because he think 76 is more important for OW. Everybody’s cheer always for 76. Because some reasons , some people started criticizing OW and Reyes. Reyes is a arrogant people,he couldn’t bear this situation. So Reyes tried to kill 76 but 76 did not die. This time, OW divide two power. Reyes’s team “Talon” and OW.

Edited

Mercy and Reyes had a suspicious talk about when Reyes died on the battlefield and Mercy revived him, then he killed her.
Maybe he was afraid of Mercy because he thought she would tell her team members that he was not dead. So, that’s why he killed her.

Let me introduce Reyes(AKA Azrael) to you.
OW has a team member named Morrison (AKA soldier76). Reyes was his friend for a long time. They were OW’s secret service. They did some intelligence tasks. Reyes envied 76 because he thought 76 was more important to OW. Everybody always cheered for 76. For some reasons, some people started criticizing OW and Reyes. Reyes is an arrogant person, he couldn’t bear everybody cheering for 76. So Reyes tried to kill 76 but 76 did not die. After Reyes tried to murder 76, OW divided into two powers. Reyes’s team is called “Talon”.

Pronunciation

criticize / criticizing ( krit – i – size – ing ) / criticized / will criticize

eg.The teacher criticized my writing because it was awful.

Vocabulary

fix it / correct it / edit it / revise it / make it better

eg. The sink is broken. We need to fix it.

eg. Our homework needs to be corrected by the teacher.

eg. My writing needs to be edited/revised by the English teacher.

eg. My cake doesn’t look very nice. I need to make it better. 

eg. My room looks a little awful, so I need to make it better.

murder / murdering / murdered / will murder v. to kill

Grammar

 an + vowels!!! (a, e, i, o, u)

a apple > an apple

a arrogant person > an arrogant person

a elephant > an elephant

a island > an island

a octopus > an octopus

a umbrella > an umbrella