F2F Class Notes 7th December (Celeste)

Vocabulary

double pane window n. –  consist of two pieces of glass with air or gas between the two panes

Original

Writing based on: Class 1

Good Morning Smart English Team

Because of my job I have some of friends whom following nonviolence diet which means they don’t eat meat and reject the clothing made by animal’s skin . For their appearance is easy to tell what is Hippy look like .
They have piercing in their ears or nose , dreadlocks ( I was wondering why their scalp won’t feel itch without watching their hair everyday ) .
They often judge people who eat meat to intake nutrition (like cartilage) for thier own good . . there are many food can get good nutrition like ear mushroom that is good for shiny skill and cartilage .
Be more minded is the best way to avoid argument with others .

Edited

Writing based on: Class 1

Good Morning Smart English Team

Because I am a yoga instructor I have some friends who follow a nonviolence diet which means they don’t eat meat and reject clothing made of  animal’s skin. From their appearance I can easily tell that they are  hippies.
They have piercings in their ears or nose and dreadlocks. I am wondering if  their scalp will feel itchy without washing  their hair everyday.
They often judge people who eat meat to intake protein like cartilage for their own nutrition. There are many foods that can give  good nutrition like ear mushrooms that are good for shiny skin and cartilage.
Being more open minded is the best way to avoid arguments with others. = To be more open minded is the best way to avoid arguments with others.

Pronunciation

pale  ( pay – ull )

scalp ( sc al p )

piercing ( peer – sing )