F2F Class Notes 4th August (Celeste)***

Next Class: Please review and edit the last paragraph.

Original

In the past 2 years, I think the consumption behavior of Chinese women have a huge change. I just remember 20 years ago Chinese women had no sense, no money, no time to care about themselves. Including inside and outside. They were busy to make living. But, with the developing of economy in China, so Chinese women begin to realize that they need take care themselves both inside and outside. They get more opportunity to go to top universities in order to get good education. They play a vital role in the society. They realize not only the education is very important but also their appearance is also very important so they begin to use series products to take care their skincare and it makes them look more beautiful.

They were busy taking care of their families and their job, so they were exhausted.

Now there are many choice for the Chinese women to shop skincare products and clothing, shoes with the development of e-commerce. It is very convenient for them to shop online. They are millions of products online. They can choose whatever they like to buy. The e-commerce makes their life become a cinch. Everything online isn’t out of reach. There are a lot of expats in Shanghai, so we also have a e-commerce platform, baopal, for them to do online shopping, and they offer bilingual service. So, it’s very convenient to expats to shop online in China.

I think the Chinese women become more and more confident and they not only persue their career success but also pay attention to their appearance. They can live a better life and have more opportunity to go abroad. They can recognize which type of products are suitable for them to use. And the taste of become much better.

Edited

In the past 20 years, I think the consumption behavior of Chinese women has had a huge change / has changed. I just remember 20 years ago, Chinese women did not put themselves first, they were not their first priority. They had no money or time to take care of themselves. They neglected themselves on the inside and outside.They were busy taking care of their families and their job, so they were exhausted.

But, with the developing economy in China, Chinese women began to realize that they needed to take care of themselves both inside and outside. They got more opportunities to go to top universities in order to get a good education. They continue to play a vital role in society. They realized not only that their education is very important but also their appearance. So, they began to use a skincare regimen to take care of their skin and it made them look more beautiful.

Now there are many choices for Chinese women to shop for skincare products, clothing, and shoes with the development of e-commerce. It is very convenient for them to shop online. There are millions of products online. They can choose whatever they like to buy. The e-commerce makes their life become a cinch. Everything online isn’t out of reach.

There are a lot of expats in Shanghai, so we also have an e-commerce platform, baopals, for them to shop online and they offer a bilingual service. So, it’s very convenient to expats to shop online in China.

TBC

I think the Chinese women become more and more confident and they not only persue their career success but also pay attention to their appearance. They can live a better life and have more opportunity to go abroad. They can recognize which type of products are suitable for them to use. And the taste of become much better.