F2F Class Notes 2nd August (Celeste)

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I think my childhood is normal not so special. I spent a lot of time at my grandma’s.
My grandmother she was a very nice old lady. She was very kindhearted. She took very good care of me and my other cousins. My grandparents’ house was like a kindergarten for us girls because my cousins and my parents were all very busy at their work so it become my gps’ job to take care of us. It’s a very normal situation for our generation. My gps were not very strict to us. They liked singing with us and playing majong.

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I think my childhood was normal but also special. I spent a lot of time at my grandma’s.
My grandmother, she was a very nice old lady. She was very kindhearted. She took very good care of me and my other cousins. My grandparents’ house was like a kindergarten for us girls because my aunts, uncles and my parents/ our parents were all very busy at work so it became my gps’ job to take care of us. It’s a very normal situation for our generation. My gps were not very strict. / My gps were not very hard on us. They liked singing with us and playing majong.

When I am sleeping, my gm she would using a fan to make me feel cooler.

When I was sleeping, my gm would use a fan to cool me down.

Every morning she went to the market to bring/take/make/buy/purchase us breakfast / pick up breakfast for us.

She took care/made/cooked/prepared of every meal that we had/ate.

She was not highly educated and she nearly knew/ almost knew nothing about characters.

housework – uncountable

arranged marriage – usually parents arrange the marriage for their children

sex slavery trade – usually  when young children and women are sold for sex

He died of a broken heart.