F2F Class Notes 29th November (Celeste)***

Write Part 1 about Angel’s story. Try to use the new vocabulary below. Upload it to the upload writing page.

Original

In this weekend I played a game called Overwatch with my friends Jimmy, Crystal and Eddie. In this game, every team has 6 team members. I played a character named Angel. She is very thin and she has 2 wings. She treats the other team members like nurse or doctor.She can treat the team members and when one team member was die she can help one member to revive.We kill other team members and guard important targets/places.So I must cooperate with my friends.Every maps have a story and every heros(character) from different countries.This game has many maps,such as Hanamura(Japan),Nepal,Temple of Anubis⋯Different maps have different battle targets.As players level up in Overwatch, they’ll earn rewards, like portrait borders for character portraits.This game take place at this time.I play this game because I really like shooting games, I think it makes me very excited, and this game in China is very famous.For long time ago,my cousin told me about this game and she advised me to play this game.When I know the story about ow,I learn about this world need more heros and justice will be done.I love ow and every heros’ stories,it makes me very affected.

Edited

Last weekend I played a game called Overwatch with my friends Jimmy, Crystal and Eddie. In this game, every team has 6 team members. I play a character named Angel. She is very thin and she has 2 wings. She’s the medic because she treats the other team members.  When one team member dies she can revive them. The objective of the game is to kill the other team and guard important targets and places. So, I must cooperate with my friends. Every map of the different countries has a story about the hero that came from that country. This game has many maps, such as Hanamura(Japan), Nepal, and Temple of Anubis… Different maps have different battle targets. As players level up in Overwatch, they’ll earn rewards, like portrait borders for character portraits. This game take place now, in this time period. I play this game because I really like shooting games and I know they makes me very excited. Also, this game in China is very famous. A long time ago, my cousin told me about this game and she pushed/convinced/persuaded me to play this game. When I heard about the story of OW, I learned that this world needs more heroes and maybe justice will be served. I love OW and every heroes’ stories, they affect my emotions.

Vocabulary

medic n. – a person who helps people who are hurt on the battlefield

death – noun

eg. My team member’s death made us lose the game.

die / dying / died / will die – verb

eg. He is dying right now on the battlefield.

dead – adj

eg. He is dead. He needs Angel to revive him.

push / pushing / pushed / will push

convince / convincing / convinced / will convince

persuade / persuading / persuaded / will persuade

Pronunciation

cooperate ( cO – op – perate )

justice ( just – iss )