F2F Class Notes 26th September (Celeste) [3/1]

Review: greedy, selfish, selfless, short stories…

Next Class: Review the edited story below.

Original

Yesterday morning, I went to the train station market to buy a new glasses with my friend. Yesterday afternoon, my family went shopping in Changhuang Miao. It’s not near here it’s near Renmin Square. I only bought a ring. We left there around 3 o’clock and then went back home. I did some houseworks and my daughter played herself and watched TV and my husband did cooking. Then around 6 o’clock we had dinner. After that we did washing and then learned English with my daughter.

Edited

Yesterday morning, I went to a market near the Shanghai Train Station to buy a new pair of glasses with my friend. Yesterday afternoon, my family went shopping at Changhuang Miao. It’s not near here it’s near Renmin Square. I only bought a ring. We left there/the shopping mall/Changyang Miao around 3 o’clock and then went back home. I did some housework and my daughter played by herself and watched TV and my husband cooked dinner. Then around 6 o’clock we had dinner. After that we took showers/baths and then I reviewed her English homework with her.

glasses / pair of glasses

eg. Where are my glasses?

eg. I’m wearing my new pair of glasses.

ring – jewelry for fingers

earrings – jewelry for ears

spoiled adj. – when sb gets everything they want even if they don’t deserve it

electricity – energy source

electronics – phones, tablets, computers, TVs, stereos, radios