F2F Class Notes 26th March (Cricket)[W]

greetings

What’s up with you? What have you been up to? What have you been doing lately?

New Zealand is a whole other world.

Writing exercise

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On the work experience, So far I have been working in Shanghai over six years. During that time, I have been working as a real estate agent that I have sell different kind of properties, like apartments, houses, business buildings and rental offices in a business park. I like my job, I like to talk with various different people. After I had worked, I can estimate whether a client they actually interested or not at first and how do I force at right way to sell.
But now, I want to change my job a little bit , I want to find a company which have international environment, I can use English in my work. It is one of reasons I come here. I hope I can be a member of this company
It is my introduce and somethings I want to said.
I am a outgoing, sincere and always positive person.I like to traveling and studying that keep me have good attitude for life and work. I enjoy talking to different types of people. This is one of the reasons I am became a salesperson/started doing this kind of work. I also like to take a high salary by good sales under pressure.

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On the work experience, So far I have been working in Shanghai over six years. During that time, I have been working as a real estate agent.  I sell various kinds of property, including  apartments, houses, business buildings and rental offices. I enjoy my job, I like to talk to all types of people. After I had worked for six years in that field, I could estimate whether or not a client was actually interested in buying. Once, I knew that I could sell it the right way.  
Now I’m looking to change my job, I want to find a company that has an international environment, so that  I can use English at work. It is one of the many reasons that I came to you. I hope I can be a member of your company
Tell me about yourself:
I am an outgoing, sincere and always positive person. I like to travel and study that’s what keeps me happy. That is one of the reasons I became a salesperson/started doing this kind of work. I am very motivated by money and enjoy working under pressure.