F2F Class Notes 25th November (Raph/Celeste)

Corrections

My mom don’t let me have it. – My mom doesn’t let me have it.

Happy Thanksgiving Picture Story

Original

There are Mickey, Minnie, Donald and Daisy, Goofy and Pluto. Goofy and Pluto are at the back of the picture behind Mickey, Minnie, Donald, and Daisy. I can see a house at the left back in the picture. I can see some food on the table like a big turkey, a chocolate pie, 3 ears of corn, and a loaf of bread and a pumpkin. Goofy and Pluto are happy. Mickey, Minnie, Donald, Daisy are very happy. Donald is having a hat on his head and Minnie has a blanket on her head. The pumpkin is in the front of Minnie, Mickey, Donald and Daisy. This picture is about Happy Thanksgiving. Thanks is “thank you”. They are thankful for having a delicious meal before. I am thankful for my mommy and daddy too because my daddy teaches me chess and my mommy teaches me exercise.

Edited

Mickey, Minnie, Donald, Daisy, Goofy and Pluto are in the picture.  Goofy and Pluto are at the back of the picture behind Mickey, Minnie, Donald, and Daisy. I can see a house on the left at the back /at the left in the picture in the back. I can see some food on the table like a big turkey, a chocolate pie, 3 ears of corn, a loaf of bread, and a pumpkin. Goofy and Pluto are very happy. Mickey, Minnie, Donald and Daisy are very happy. Donald has a hat on his head and Minnie has a blanket on her head. The pumpkin is in front of Minnie, Mickey, Donald and Daisy. This picture is about Thanksgiving. Thanks is “thank you”. They are thankful for having a delicious meal. I am thankful for my mommy and daddy too because my daddy teaches me chess and my mommy teaches me exercise.