F2F Class Notes 24th November (Celeste)

Write a story about when you will go to Suzhou next year. Write about what you are excited about and what might make you nervous or scared.

Original

I love to draw beacause a drawing can tell people my idea or inne voice.It’s an animation movie made me to found this passion.For a long period of time，I was crazy of drew animation character.Every time I put my heart into draw,I enjoy drawing.In my childhood,I can’t do well in draw,I felt very awful and I hated to draw because it was too difficult for me .I thank maybe I was not suitable to draw.After I saw an animation called”totoro”,I wanted to started learning drawing animation character over .So I bought many information books about how to draw animation character to read.I practised drawing every day.When I can draw a beautiful character，I’m really happy and excited.I think draw makes me enjoyable and show my drawing to my friends can make me become confident.

Edited

I love to draw because a drawing can tell/show people my idea or inner voice. An animation movie made me find/discover this passion. For a long period of time, I was crazy about drawing animation characters. Every time I put my heart into my drawing because I enjoy drawing. In my childhood, I couldn’t draw well, I felt very awful and I hated to draw because it was too difficult for me. I thought maybe I was not good enough to draw. / I thought maybe I wasn’t a good drawer or animator. After I saw an animation called “Totoro”, I wanted to start over learning how to draw animation characters. / I wanted to start learning how to draw animation characters again. So I bought many informational/practice/drawing books about how to draw animation characters to read. I practised drawing every day.When I draw a beautiful character, I’m really happy and excited. I enjoy drawing and showing my friends my work makes me become more confident. 

Grammar

crazy about sth/sb

eg. Celeste is crazy about her dog.

eg. I am crazy about computer games!

can / can’t

could / couldn’t

I have gone to other cities by myself. >< I haven’t gone to other cities by myself.

Vocabulary

We cook meats and vegetables and we bake cakes, biscuits and bread.

Every weekend I will come back/return to SH.

roommate n. – person who shares a room with you

housemate n. – person who lives in the same house as you