F2F Class Notes 23rd September (Celeste)

I have a dinner date with my friends tonight.

I have a brunch date later this week.

I want to go on a movie date with you.

1st Edit

Yesterday, I went to a brand new bakery on Julu Road which is a very fashionable street/place/neighborhood in Shanghai. When I got there, I was fascinated by the wonderful atmosphere. The decoration is just my type. It’s simple but modern. It’s spacious and bright with high ceilings. There are wood tables and chairs which are surrounded by green plants. When you sit there to have a cup of coffee, it’s as if you are in nature. It’s very relaxing there.
I ordered a latte and a croissant. The shop assistant was friendly. After I paid for my order, I saw there were some bread samples on the cashier counter. So I tried some bread, the fig bread tasted very good. I bought one for tomorrow’s breakfast.
I found a quiet seat near the window. The latte was so tasty. I loved it.

Original

… The croissant is soft and has many layers. It smelled enjoyable. I also liked the background music. It’s soft and light. I don’t like the background music which is loud. I had a really good time in Lost Bakery, so I would like to recommend this brand new bakery to my friends. I think I have another nice place to spend my time.

Edited

… The croissant was soft and had many layers. It smelled enjoyable. I also liked the background music. It was soft and light. I don’t like when the background music in cafes and restaurants is loud. I had a really good time in Lost Bakery, so I would like to recommend this brand new bakery to my friends. Now, I have another nice place to spend my time.

flaky (flAy – kee ) adj. – when sth breaks apart into many small pieces like paper

Croisaants are soft, flaky, buttery, not too sweet, just right…

delectable (duh – lec – tuh – bull ) – delicious, appealing, appetizing. delightful, enjoyable