F2F Class Notes 23rd November (Celeste)***

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Happy Thanksgiving Picture Story

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There are Mickey, Minnie, Donald and Daisy, Goofy and Pluto. Goofy and Pluto are at the back of the picture behind Mickey, Minnie, Donald, and Daisy. I can see a house at the left back in the picture. I can see some food on the table like a big turkey, a chocolate pie, 3 ears of corn, and a loaf of bread and a pumpkin. Goofy and Pluto are happy. Mickey, Minnie, Donald, Daisy are very happy. Donald is having a hat on his head and Minnie has a blanket on her head. The pumpkin is in the front of Minnie, Mickey, Donald and Daisy. This picture is about Happy Thanksgiving. Thanks is “thank you”. They are thankful for having a delicious meal before. I am thankful for my mommy and daddy too because my daddy teaches me chess and my mommy teaches me exercise.

Michelle’s Editing and Typing Practice

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Mickey, Minnie, Donald and Daisy, Goofy and Pluto are

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. Goofy and Pluto are at the back of the picture behind Mickey, Minnie, Donald, and Daisy. I can see a house at the left back in the picture. I can see some food on the table like a big turkey, a chocolate pie, 3 ears of corn, and a loaf of bread and a pumpkin. Goofy and Pluto are happy. Mickey, Minnie, Donald, Daisy are very happy. Donald is having a hat on his head and Minnie has a blanket on her head. The pumpkin is in the front of Minnie, Mickey, Donald and Daisy. This picture is about Happy Thanksgiving. Thanks is “thank you”. They are thankful for having a delicious meal before. I am thankful for my mommy and daddy too because my daddy teaches me chess and my mommy teaches me exercise.