F2F Class Notes 22nd March (Tanya) [w] [s]

Vocabulary

普通 – normal, nothing special about it

e.g. There was nothing special about the Changzhou Dinosaur park.

original

I traveled to Changzhou with my boyfriend last week. We went to the Changzhou Dinosaur Park and it was a theme park. I rode a roller coaster it was really scary than Jingjiang parks’. I enjoyed a hot spring too. The park was really common but the hot spring is really great. There were many kinds of hot spring especially fishes hot spring there were many special fishes in that hot spring. The special fishes can ate your dead skins. The hotel was incredibly good. It was dinosaur theme hotel. It was beautiful,cute and waiters were enthusiasm. When we left hotel waiter gave me a cute dinosaur doll. It was really sweet. My favorite part was breakfast buffet there are many kinds of foods such as rich,milk,small wonton,crisps and sausages. All these were tasty so l liked them!

correction 

I travelled to Changzhou with my boyfriend last week. We went to the Changzhou Dinosaur Park. It was a theme park. I rode a roller coaster, it was scarier than the one in Jingjiang park. I enjoyed going to the hot springs too. The park was really normal  but the hot springs were really great. There were many kinds of hot springs, what was special was the fish hot spring. There were many special fish in that hot spring. The special fish can eat your dead skin. The hotel was incredibly good. It was a dinosaur themed hotel. It was beautiful, cute and the waiters were enthusiastic. When we left the hotel, the waiter gave me a cute dinosaur doll. It was really sweet. My favorite part was the breakfast buffet. There were many kinds of food such as rice, milk, small wontons, crisps and sausages. All these were tasty so l liked them!

original

He is fat. He is bigger than me. He like play computer games and eat food. He is very childish. I feel he childish. He is big than me but he always like child. He is 24. When we in high school we met each other. It’s boring, too long time.

He like childrens but I don’t like. Because I had a part-time job as play with children, teach them crafts. The children are very rude. They always like cry. I did that two years but now I’m busy.

My boss. I can’t make opinion because she always thinks she is right. She is very cheap. She always buy very cheap things. That’s bad but we can’t say.

correction

He is fat. He is bigger than me. He likes to play computer games and eat food. He is very childish. He is older than me but he always acts like a child. He is 24. We met each other when we were in high school. It’s boring, it has been too long.

He likes children but I don’t like them. Because I had a part-time job playing with children, teaching them crafts. The children were very rude. They were always crying. I did that for two years but now I don’t anymore because I’m busy.

My boss. I can’t tell her about my opinions because she always thinks she is right. She is very cheap. She always buys very cheap things. That’s bad but we can’t say anything about it.

Grammar

scary

more (comparing) – scarier

the most – scariest

fish doesn’t have plural: 1 fish, 2 fish

Pronunciation

sausages – so sedg es

enthusiastic