F2F Class Notes 21st November (Celeste)
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On Saturday I went to park with my friends. At 4 o’clock we had a lunch. We ate noodles. We went back home. I and my friends played LOL/computer games. After that, I took a shower. Then we played games on our phone for 4 hours. We slept for 3 hours and we woke up at 2 o’clock in the morning. Then we made a small cake. It’s a yogurt blueberry mousse. This weekend I feel very happy and excited because I never stay at home by myself before. When I was 10 age I was scared stay at home by myself and I was crying.
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On Saturday I went to a/the/People’s Square park with my friends. At 4 o’clock we had lunch. We ate hot, noodle soup. After lunch, we went back to my house.  My friends and I played LOL/computer games. After that, I took a shower. Then we played games on our phones for 4 hours. We slept for 3 hours and we woke up at 2 o’clock in the morning. Then we made a small, blueberry yogurt mousse cake.
This weekend I felt very happy and excited because I never stayed at home by myself before. When I was 10 / 10 years old, I was scared because my parents went out and they didn’t tell me. I woke up at home by myself and I was crying.
LOL  = League of Legends  ( Leeg  uv  le-jinds )
Grammar
Q: Did you win or did you lose while playing LOL?
A: Win. / Lose.
A: I won while playing LOL. / I lost while playing LOL.
simple  tense / present tense, -ing / past tense, -ed / future tense, will ____
eg. win / winning  / won / will win
eg. lose / losing / lost / will lose
eg. play / playing / played / will play
eg. sleep / sleeping / slept / will sleep
eg. make / making / made / will make
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