F2F Class Notes 18th April (Ben)

Original

Now my ideal vacation line is Baasha. They call Baasha small Maldives. It’s beautiful like Maldives and cheaper than Maldives. It’s easily that you just want pay some money than you can get the visa. Baasha is a island so it’s famous for the seafood and the seafood is cheap so you can enjoy the seafood and don’t worry about the price. You just want pay for 3,000RMB and you can get a nice journey. If you think the hotel don’t want very good it just can sleep is ok and the plan don’t want nice service,comfortable seat and nice take off time. You may be just want pay for 2,000RMB and you can get a journey. In Baasha you can diving,surfing and do everything about the sea. The import reason I choice Baasha is cheap. My mother can’t give me money for my travel and 3,000RMB is ok if I work hard and don’t buy a mess I can save money maybe for 3 months.

Edited version

Now my ideal vacation line is Baasha. They call Baasha the small Maldives.

It’s as beautiful as the Maldives and cheaper (than the Maldives).

It’s easy, you just need to pay some money then you can get a visa.

Baasha is an island so it’s famous for the seafood and the seafood is cheap, so you can enjoy it and don’t worry about the price.

You just need to pay for 3,000RMB and you can get a nice journey.

If you think the hotel don’t want very good it just can sleep is ok and the plan don’t want nice service,comfortable seat and nice take off time.

You may be just want pay for 2,000RMB and you can get a journey.

In Baasha you can diving,surfing and do everything about the sea.

The import reason I choice Baasha is cheap.

My mother can’t give me money for my travel and 3,000RMB is ok if I work hard and don’t buy a mess I can save money maybe for 3 months.

Corrections

I am taller than you. I am as tall as you.

Bruce Lee was as famous as Michael Jackson.

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It’s nicely –> It’s nice

It’s easily –> It’s easy

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so = 为了 / 所以

I learn English so I can get a good job. (为了get a new job)

I know English, so I can get a good job. (所以 I can get a new job)

I am saving money so I can go to Bashaa. –> 为了可以去Bashaa

I am saving money, so I can go to Bashaa –> 我现在就能去

a heart 心脏

cream 奶油

concentrated 浓缩的, 聚精会神的

Concentrated coffee makes me concentrated.

cucumber 黄瓜

seedless watermelon = 没有籽的西瓜

oval 椭圆形

Seedless watermelons are oval, whereas normal watermelons are round.

A/C 空调

(air conditioning)

Grammar

drink / drank / drunk

I drank too much coffee and couldn’t sleep.