F2F Class Notes 14th December (Celeste)
Homework
Read the edited story below 2-3 times at home. Be prepared to retell the story with confidence in your next class.
Writing exercise
Original
In my childhood , my dream was to be a pianist. Because my father play the vilion very well and my grandmother was a piano teacher. I thought play the piano is very easy, it is cool. But now I want to abandon to play the piano,it is so hard and difficult to me. When I am seven years old ,I learned it. My father commanded me I must play the piano for four hours or more times on the weekend. It is boring and it makes me tired. Piano bring me some interesting,I can pluck my favourite music.
Corrections
Since my childhood, when I was seven years old I learned how to play the piano. My father commanded me to play the piano for four hours or more on the weekends. My dream was to be a pianist because my father played the violin very well and my grandmother was a piano teacher. I thought playing the piano was very easy and it was so cool.
But now I want to abandon playing the piano. Now, it is so hard and difficult for me. It is boring and it makes me tired.
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