F2F Class Notes 11th May (Tony)

Vocabulary

Are you a new student?   I’m a new student.

How long have you been a student here?  I’ve been a student for a week.

When did you start class here? I started class about a week ago.

I came to  shanghai about 2 years ago.

How long will you have class here?

I will have class for a year.

write well

I wrote a short story

I used my phone search the internet –  I was looking at stuff online until 11am.

a cup of soda with ice

things – 1 thing 2 things 3 things many things

stuff – stuff  a lot of stuff, too much stuff, so much stuff

transition – to change between two things

Grammar

go to a place TO do something

Then, Now, After…       Transition Words

Use a verb as a Transition Word:      I started doing my homework.   I finished eating and went to bed.

I started to feel hungry, so I called for food.

I kept studying all night, until the sun came up.

A long time ago,A god lived a deeply river near a lot of villages.There are people always poor and busy.One day,A young girl put an apple down the river.The poor girl was so sad.Her voice was loud enough when she cried.She woke up the god of falled in sleep.But the god is not angry.He came the surface and asked the poor girl.”why were you crying.”The poor girl said,I lost my apple in the river,I had only one.The god is very kindness.He put an apple as seem as her and ate it face to face.At this time,the poor girl was so shocked and cried even loudly.The god reached out his right hand,An apple seed on his hand.He said,didn’t cry,I will give you an apple tree of full apples.It would never to ever ate.Only you drop the apple seed into the earth.After that,he left.
The poor girl came home and dropped it.Winter had away,Spring had away,Summer had away,Autumn came,The poor girl really got a lot of apples.She shares apples with other people.Amazingly,the apple really never to ever eat all the time.

A long time ago, A god lived in a deep river near a lot of villages. The people are always poor and hardworking. One day, A young girl dropped an apple in the river.The poor girl was so sad.Her scream was really loud when she cried.She woke up the god of sleep.But the god was not angry.He came to the surface and asked the poor girl.”why were you crying.”The poor girl said,I lost my apple in the river,I had only one.The god was very kind. He got an apple exactly like hers and ate it in front of her.,the poor girl was shocked and cried even louder.The god reached out his right hand,there was An apple seed on his hand.He said,dont‘t cry,I will give you an apple tree full of apples.You could never finish them all.you only need to drop the apple seed into the earth.After that,he left.
The poor girl came home and planted it.All the seasons passed until,Autumn came,The poor girl really got a lot of apples.She shares apples with other people.Amazingly,the apple really never ran out.

Next Class review this story;s corrections.