F2F Class Notes 10th October (Celeste)***

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My boyfriend with his friends and I went to inner mongolia for holiday on National Day on October 1-8.
The first day we took a plane from hongqiao airport to Hohhot at 5:25pm.Arrived at 8pm.Then we’re took a text to Anda hotel,this’s youth hostel.So we 6 people sleep in a room.
The second day we went to a tour . The tour was 4 days 3night ,it took us went to grassland first.We’re rode a house,archery and pick excrement out in the grassland which was funny.And then we’re sleep in Mongolian yurt in night.Let me most impressive is natural toilet,because of have no toilet in the grassland.If I have to pie need to walk too far out Mongolian yurt at everytime. It’s really not convenience.
The third day we woke up very early and ate Mongolia breakfast , next we took 6 hours by bus went to desert.We rode a camel walk around desert.After we went to a small city,that name is call daoqi.So we took shower in the hotel and I feel so comfortable.
The fourth day the tour just took us visited Mongolia museum and then went back to Hohhot.
The fifth day we took 2 hours by bus went to shanxi and Mongolia have a common boundary for visited old Great Wall.
The sixth day, because we really like grassland so we went another grassland.We bought a whole sheep for 6 people for lunch.We need to pay 2100 RMB which was expensive.I thought so crazy of us . This lamb is very good, but I ate it too much, after I don’t eat it ever again.Next we took a night train from Hohhot to Yinchun.
The seventh and eighth days we just visited Yinchun city and took a plane came back to Shanghai.

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My boyfriend, his friends and I went to Inner Mongolia for vacation  for/during National Day on October 1-8. (first to the eighth)

The first day we took a plane from Hongqiao Airport to Hohhot at 5:25pm and arrived at 8pm. Then we took a taxi to Anda Hotel which is a youth hostel. So the 6 of us slept in one room.

The second day we went on a tour. The tour was for 4 days and 3 nights, it took us to the grasslands first.We rode horses, did archery and picked up cow excrement/manure out in the grasslands which was used to make a fire for cooking, it was funny. Then we slept in a Mongolian yurt. The thing that shocked me the most was going pee in the grass. natural toilet,because of have no toilet in the grasslands. If I have to pee need to walk too far out Mongolian yurt at everytime. It’s really not convenience.

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The third day we woke up very early and ate Mongolia breakfast , next we took 6 hours by bus went to desert. We rode a camel walk around the desert.After we went to a small city,that name is call daoqi.So we took shower in the hotel and I feel so comfortable.
The fourth day the tour just took us visited Mongolia museum and then went back to Hohhot.
The fifth day we took 2 hours by bus went to shanxi and Mongolia have a common boundary for visited old Great Wall.
The sixth day, because we really like grassland so we went another grassland.We bought a whole sheep for 6 people for lunch.We need to pay 2100 RMB which was expensive.I thought so crazy of us . This lamb is very good, but I ate it too much, after I don’t want to eat it ever again.Next we took a night train from Hohhot to Yinchun.
The seventh and eighth days we just visited Yinchun city and then took a plane to came back to Shanghai.

desert ( de – zert )

we don’t know when she will die (direct, mean)

we don’t know when she will pass (nicer)