Email writing (Jesse)

My one day

Today I got up at 8.15, but I still feel too tired and I didn’t ‘t want to get up.but I need to get up because I need to work. So I left my bed and took a shower. Then I made up and called a taxi to go to work. When I arrived my office I began one day’s work, I knew  I had some work it was too hurry so I need to finish it today, so I never wasted my time and focus on doing my job, thank god when the (下班时间)I finished my work, so I shut down my laptop and went to beauty parlor to do a face spa, after that I back to my apartment and did exercise, learned  English grammar. Now I’m writing a email, later I will sleep, that’s my one day.
A day of mine
Today I got up at 8.15, but I still felt too tired and I didn’t ‘t want to get up, but I need to get up because I need to work. So I left my bed and took a shower. Then I put makeup on / made myself up and called a taxi to go to work. When I arrived at my office I began my day’s work. I knew  I had some work which was too urgent so I needed to finish it today, so I didn’t waste my time and focused on doing my job. Thank god when it was time to finish work, I finished my work, so I shut down my laptop and went to beauty parlor to do a facial, and after that I went back to my apartment and did exercise, and studied English grammar. Now I’m writing an email, and later I will sleep… that’s my one day.