Email Writing 20th May (Celeste)

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Today I want to talk about bullying. What is bullying ? Where does bullying always happen ? Also, who could be a bully , just let me tell you.

There are lot of kinds of bullying. Political maneuvering one way of Bullying. Sometimes people will make use of some bad things the government officer did to threaten them to get a good contract signed. Itā€™s doesnā€™t mean political maneuvering is bad, sometime people use strategy to win as well. Rumor mongering is another way of bullying which always happens in a group of friends or gang, especially among females.Ā  Embarrassing pictures posted and Character Assassination are bullying as well.
Where dose bullying happen?Ā  It may happens in school, workplace, office, home and play ground. Everyone should know that there areĀ  office Politics in the companies. You should stand in the correct queue with the right person or the manager will set you up for failure and give you more work than you can handle. Later you find donā€™t have the information, time and tool to complete the job, then you are doom to fail and have to leave the company.
A teacher, a boss, a muscular, a student and even a father or a mother could be a bully. Whenever you see a kid behave very bad which reflects what is going on in his/her family. A bully usually wants to feel in control, because he/she donā€™t have control in another area of life. A bully is also selfish and fear. Sometimes people bully other people because they are being bullied themselves.Ā  Sometimes people need more attention because of low self-esteem.

I think everyone maybe has bad experience of being bullies, and we should educate our children to be optimistic person with kindness so that bullying will never happen on them.

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Today I want to talk about bullying. What is bullying? Where does bullying happen? Also, who could be a bully?Just let me tell you.

There are lots of kinds of bullying. Political maneuvering also known asĀ blackmail is one way of bullying. Sometimes people will threaten to publicly reveal goverenment officers’ wrong doings in order to have their demands for money or a good contract met. Itā€™s doesnā€™t mean political maneuvering is bad, sometime people use strategy to win as well. Rumor mongering or gossipingĀ is another way of bullying which always happens in a group of friends or gang, especially among females. Publicly posting embarrassing pictures and character assassination are bullying as well.
Where does bullying happen? It may happen in schools, workplaces, offices, homes and playgrounds. Everyone should know that there are office politics in companies.

You should stand in the correct queue with the right person or the manager will set you up for failure and give you more work than you can handle. (What does this mean?)Ā 

Later you find donā€™t have the information, time and tools to complete the job, then you are doomed to fail and have to leave the company.
A teacher, a boss, a muscular (What is this?) , a student and even a father or a mother could be a bully. Whenever you see a kid behave very bad that reflects on what is going on inĀ their family. A bully usually wants to feel in control, becauseĀ they donā€™t have control in another area of their life. A bully is also selfish and fear (What do you mean?). Sometimes people bully other people because they are being bullied themselves. Sometimes people need more attention because of low self-esteem.

I think everyone maybe has hadĀ a bad experience of being bullies/bullied, and we should educate our children to be optimistic peopleĀ who are kindĀ so that bullying will never happenĀ to them.

blackmail – threatening sb in order to get sth

reveal – to uncover, to show

bad things <> wrong doings

demands – strongly ask for sth