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Household items as bad as cars for pollution
Scientists say that household pollution is a big reason for our pollution. Such as toothpaste, deodorant and perfume will create pollution. Dr. McDonald, air-pollution researcher, was surprised to find that household items made as much as pollution as cars and trucks. Household products also will impact our health. The small cells from our household items can be damaged to our lungs.

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Household items as bad as cars for pollution
Scientists say that household pollution is a big cause of pollution. Items such as toothpaste, deodorant and perfume will create harmful pollutants as a byproduct. Dr. McDonald, air-pollution researcher, was surprised to find that household items produced as much as pollution as cars and trucks. Household products will also impact our health. The small molecules from our household items can be damaging to our lungs.