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Spain Tourism
Spain had replaced US as the second world’s most popular tourist destination. The organization of tourism said Spain had increased 7 percent of their tourist. But their new mayor thought the number of their tourist was much higher than it. Although there has infighting in Spain，it still has a lot of tourist went there.
The tourisms of Europe, Africa, Asia and Middle East increased in 2017, but the most popular tourist destination still is French.

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Tourism in Spain
Spain has replaced the US as the world’s second most popular tourist destination. The organization of tourism said Spain had increased the number of tourists by seven percent. But their new mayor thought the actual number of tourists was much higher than that. Although there has been infighting in Spain, a lot of tourists still went there.
The number of tourists from Europe, Africa, Asia and the Middle East increased in 2017, but the most popular tourist destination still is France.