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New Year Resolutions (Please correct it and make it more like local writers)

I have planed 10 resolutions for the new and want to share with you.
1、Find a new job: The job I am working for is absolutely tedious. Making phone call every day and making contact with a stubborn team leader who never listen to your interpretation and always thinks himself is right, which let me make my decision to change a job. But I won’t quit the job hasty, like find a new one just in order to give up the bad experience now.
2、Practice English especially spoken English: Sticking to communicating with teachers in Smart English three or four times a week and doing listening exercises every day , I have to the confidence to improve my English.
3、Lost weight: My weight had been increased to 73kg last year, so I want to keep fit and return to 65kg。
4、Visit DMZ both from South and North Korea: Next month during the Chinese New Year I will visit South Korea, however, I am not sure wherever there will be a chance for me to visit North Korea because the situation of peninsula are getting more and more stressed or the government of KIM III may become closer.
5、Observe middle-term election of Taiwan at the end of 2018: One of my friends will take part in the election for councilman of Taoyuan city, so I look forward to experiencing the election campaign.
6、Save 30,000 yuan in this year
7、Learn Cantanese
8、Pass the N3 examination of Japanese（JLPT）
9、Being a good time-manager who can arrange his life regularly and heathy
10、Read at least 25-30 books

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New Year Resolutions (Please correct it and make it more like local writers)

I have planed 10 resolutions for the new year and want to share with you.
1、Find a new job: The job I am working at is absolutely tedious. Making phone calls every day and making contact with a stubborn team leader who never listens to your side and always thinks he is right, this helped me make the decision to change my job. But I won’t quit the job hastily, like find a new one just in order to quit this one.
2、Practice English especially spoken English: Continuing to communicate with teachers in Smart English three or four times a week and doing listening exercises every day , I have to have confidence to improve my English.
3、Lose weight: My weight has gone up to 73kg last year, so I want to keep fit and return to 65kg。
4、Visit DMZ both from South and North Korea: Next month during the Chinese New Year I will visit South Korea, however, I am not sure whether there will be a chance for me to visit North Korea because the situation on the peninsula could get more and more stressful or the North Korean government may become closer to China.
5、Watch the mid-term election of Taiwan at the end of 2018: One of my friends will take part in the election for councilman of Taoyuan city, so I look forward to experiencing the election campaign.
6、Save 30,000 yuan in this year
7、Learn Cantonese
8、Pass the N3 examination of Japanese（JLPT）
9、Being a good time-manager who can arrange his life regularly and healthy.
10、Read at least 25-30 books