Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email


A:How are you, Ben.
B: Can’t be better. I was laid off 3 months ago.
A: Oh, my….I’m sorry to hear that. Believe me, I didn’t mean to hit you where it hurt.
B: No worries. I’ve got a new job in Microsoft.
A: Congratulations! It’s a great company.
B: Yes. My major back to the school was computer science, remember?
A: So you can put what you’ve learnt into practice.
B: Nope. I work in the administration department now as an assistant.
A: What?
B: Yes. My wife said if I couldn’t find a job soon she would try to find a job and I will have to take care of the kids at home. So I decided to accept any position. Now I can take a load off and no need to worry about staying at home like a woman.
B:With all due respect, I think women staying at home with kids contribute a lot to a family.
A: Don’t get me wrong. That goes without saying. I’m just really bad at dealing with chores, you know what I’m saying?

Your Edited Email


A:How are you, Ben.
B: Couldn’t be better. I was laid off 3 months ago.
A: Oh, my….I’m sorry to hear that. Believe me, I didn’t mean to hit you where it hurt.
B: No worries. I’ve got a new job in Microsoft.
A: Congratulations! It’s a great company.
B: Yes. My major back in school was computer science, remember?
A: So you can put what you’ve learned into practice.
B: Nope. I work in the administration department now as an assistant.
A: What?
B: Yes. My wife said if I couldn’t find a job soon she would try to find a job and I will have to take care of the kids at home. So I decided to accept any position. Now I can take a load off and no need to worry about staying at home like a woman.
B:With all due respect, I think women staying at home with kids contributes a lot to a family.
A: Don’t get me wrong. That goes without saying. I’m just really bad at doing chores, you know what I’m saying?