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Company A and Company B will reportedly join force to produce a new product. Company A has made strides for adding new users, but not boosting profits. Company B is full of software savvies which enables their cooperation to be a successful one . A lot of employees of these two companies are wanting to find someone they can be head over heels and later on settle down in this city.

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Company A and Company B will reportedly join forces to produce a new product through synergy. Company A has made strides by adding new users, but not boosting profits. Company B is full of software savvy individuals, which ensures their cooperation will be successful. A lot of employees at these two companies are looking for someone they can fall head over heels in love with, and later settle down in this city.