Email Service Notes (Tony)

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I’m an only child,I enjoy having time to myself.I often read in the sofa,Reading makes me feel happy.But I have a lot of work to do. One day I told my husband that I wanted to learn spoken English ,he tell me: you should believe in yourself,you need practice spoken English,Nothing is impossible.we have been together for 20years,he is my best friend,he works really hard,we are very similar.l like light food,he like rich food,we’re very different from eating.We go to Suzhou every month,Suzhou is famous for its gardens and food,we are tired and travel make us relaxed.live the life you love,we are same.

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I’m an only child, so I enjoy having time to myself. I often read on the sofa. Reading makes me feel happy. But I have a lot of work to do. One day I told my husband that I wanted to learn spoken English, he told me, “you should believe in yourself, you need to practice spoken English, nothing is impossible. We have been together for 20years, he is my best friend and works really hard, we are very similar. I like light food, he likes rich food, we’re very different about eating. We go to Suzhou every month, Suzhou is famous for its gardens and food. We are tired and traveling makes us relaxed. We both want to live the life we love, we are same that way.