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Travel diary entry Oct.10 in SLC

Today we got up at 5 and moved on to our first scenic spot which called Antelope Canyon at 6. Antelope Canyon is one of the seven photograph wonders of the world which is located in Arizona of U.S.A. It is really beautiful and belong to the Native American Indians who live in the area. The Native American Indian as our guide took us visit there and help us to take beautiful pictures inside it. I can’t help to admire nature of the magic of nature.

After that we went to Bryce Canyon and had a lunch in a gas station nearby there.
Compare with Antelope Canyon, Bryce Canyon is belong to another kind of style. It seems like a paradise for hikers.

Now I am on the way to Salt Lake City（SLC） and we will live in there tonight. Tomorrow we will set out to the famous Yellow Stone National Park which sounds so exciting. Hope everything goes well tomorrow.

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Travel diary entry Oct.10 in SLC

Today we got up at 5 and moved on to our first scenic spot called Antelope Canyon at 6. Antelope Canyon is one of the seven photographic wonders of the world, located in Arizona of U.S.A. It is breathtaking and belongs to the Native Americans indigenous to the area. Our Native American guide took us there and helped us to take beautiful pictures inside it. I can’t help admiring the magic of nature.

After that we went to Bryce Canyon and had lunch in a gas station nearby there. The setting of Bryce Canyon is very different compared to Antelope Canyon. It seems like a paradise for hikers.

Now I am on the way to Salt Lake City（SLC） and we will stay there tonight. Tomorrow we will set out to the famous Yellow Stone National Park which sounds so exciting. Hope everything goes well tomorrow.