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The last week at SE
From last year July twelfth to August fifteenth, I have been studying English at SE for 13 month. This Saturday I will finish my study. Time passes so quick that I just realize/have just realized I will leave there and say Goodbye to all teachers, Judy and Claire. I am unwilling/reluctant to leave, but I have to. SE has given me so many wonderful memories. With teachers’ help, I have made great progress on listening, speaking, reading and writing. I still remember the first time I had a demo with Jesse at the office who served me so good. Judy also showed respect to me. After the demo I had made up my mind starting/ that I would start English studying there. The result is I made a right choice. Teachers are high quality. Claire is much of patience to solve my problems. Because I studied English at SE, I had encourage to talk to foreigners. Now I have many foreign friends from different countries. Usually I hang out with them and practice English and get progressive very quickly. Now it’s time to leave. However I won’t forget the wonderful time at SE. I will continue studying English. Bye, SE.

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The last week at SE

I have been studying English at SE for 13 month, since July 12th last year until August 15th. This Saturday I will finish my course. Time passes so quickly that I have just realized I will leave there and say Goodbye to all the teachers, Judy and Claire. I am reluctant to leave, but the time has come. SE has given me so many wonderful memories. With teachers’ help, I have made great progress on listening, speaking, reading and writing. I still remember the first time I had a demo with Jesse at the office who gave me the help that I needed. Judy has also been respectful, kind and helpful to me. After the demo my mind was made up to start English studying there. It turns out I made the right choice. The teachers are extremely professional and their assistant Claire patiently helps me solve my problems. Because I’ve been studying English at SE, I’ve found the courage to talk to foreigners. Now I have many foreign friends from different countries. Usually I hang out with them and practice English and progress(V.) very quickly. Unfortunately, now it’s time to leave. However I won’t forget the wonderful time at SE. Of course I will continue studying English. Bye, SE.