Email Service Notes (Tony)

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I think the key to making friends is having the same conceptions of life, morality and world and hobbies. I always have the feeling that I may know someone for a really long time, but it’s still awkward if you keep us siting around a table to chat. We’re not able to have the same feelings when it comes to certain topics. For instance, speaking of ocean, all I can think of is those amazing creatures and corals, instead he may tell me that people can be drowned in it.
I had a trip to semporna to get my scuba diving license last week, which is my first time traveling by myself. In case I’d eat alone there, I even looked for partners online in advance which I had never did before. To be honest, I didn’t look forward to meeting some interesting friends in such a short time. All I want was finding some normal people to have dinner, as my diving school would provide us lunch.
Sometimes the bigger expectation you have, the bigger disappointment it would lead to. I expected nothing when I arrived my hostel, because I didn’t want my trip to be ruined by that kind of disappointment. But guess what, most of the tenants there had the same goal as I did. Though we weren’t all in the same diving school, we still had to learn the same books and finish the same papers. Even if we came from different places and did totally different kinds of work, some of them were still students, it was quite easy for us to chat about everything the minute we met.
Therefore, it could be one of my favorite trips by now. Not only did I get my license, but I met a lot of new friends as well.

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I think the key to making friends is having the same views on life, morality, the world and hobbies. I always have the feeling that even if I have known someone for a really long time, it’s still awkward if you make us sit around a table to chat. We don’t share the same feelings when it comes to certain topics. For instance, oceans, all I can think of are those amazing creatures and coral reefs, instead he may tell me that people can drown in it.
I had a trip to semporna to get my scuba diving license last week, which is my first time traveling by myself. In case I’d eat alone there, I looked for some company online, which I had never done before. To be honest, I didn’t expect to meet some interesting friends in such a short time. All I wanted was to find some normal people to have dinner with. Since my diving school would provide lunch for us.
Sometimes the bigger expectations you have, the bigger disappointment it would lead to. I expected nothing when I arrived at my hostel, because I didn’t want my trip to be ruined by that kind of disappointment. But guess what, most of the tenants there had the same goal as I did. Though we weren’t all in the same diving school, we still had to learn the same books and finish the same paperwork. Even if we came from different places and did totally different kinds of work, some of them were still students, it was quite easy for us to chat about everything the minute we met.
Therefore, it could be one of my favorite trips so far. Not only did I get my license, but I met a lot of new friends as well.