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Part B

The set of picture leaves us an unforgettable impression that attitude drives the action. Two different attitude that we can see from the picture. The right picture shows that the boy is facing many books and thinking that I have many books, which is a cheating opinion. The right picture shows that a boy is planning the action of reading 20 books in this year. Conceivably, what the picture intends to imply is that no matter how many books he have, if these books just are put on the bookshelf, they are not real information in your mind.

In fact, this seemingly simple cartoon subtly disclosers a prevailing phenomenon. There are two fundamental factors should be show off. On the one hand, nowadays many younger people have no positive cognition that they do realize that knowledge is most important. On another hand, they keep many articles in the collection loop, but they do not review it anymore, which is the same as the boy’s thinking of left picture.

From my personal respective, we should keep enthusiasm and optimism all the time, because they are the key to drive actions.

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Part B

The set of pictures leaves an unforgettable impression on us that attitude drives action. We can see two different attitudes from the picture. The picture on the right shows that the boy is facing many books and thinking that he has many books, which is a cheating opinion. The picture on the left shows that a boy is planning to read 20 books this year. Conceivably, what the picture intends to imply is that no matter how many books he has, if these books are just put on the bookshelf, they are not real information in your mind.

In fact, this seemingly simple cartoon subtly discloses a prevailing phenomenon. There are two fundamental factors shown. On one hand, nowadays many younger people have no positive cognition that they do realize that knowledge is the most important. On the other hand, they keep many articles in the collection loop, but they do not review them anymore, which is the same as the boy’s thinking in the picture on the left.

From my personal perspective, we should stay enthusiastic and optimistic all the time, because they are the keys to drive actions.