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Speech contest 2013
Dear Teacher Li，

Long time no see. I hope this email finds you well.
To enhance the ability of English skills for our school students. We want to organize an English speech contest in August.

We are looking for the judges of this contest. We are specially appreciated that if you can be a judge of this contest, meanwhile you are foreign teacher. It will shows that our school is a cultural integration school. We are waiting for your answer; please reply the following answer sheet:
1) Which weekend of August you can attend?
2) Whether you can help us to prepare the topic of contest?

Best wish,
Liming

physical condition suggesting 2014
Dear President Wang,

I am a student from class 5 grade 3, I love sports very much. I want to give two suggestions to enhance our physical condition.

First, I think we need more kinds of PE class.
There are fewer kinds of sport classes in our current curriculum schedule. I understand that more and more time were adjusted to Chinese and math classes, because higher scores can help us apply to a better high school. But we also need relax time. Because children who can play well , that also he can learn well.

Furthermore, If PE teachers can help us setting physical condition plan according to our physical condition, it will be great. Once the plan done, maybe we can enhance team-work skills and leadership etc.

I will be very happy and grateful if my suggestions can be accept. Thank you so much.

Best wish,
Liming

Your Corrected Email:

Speech contest 2013
Dear Teacher Li，

Long time no see. I hope this email finds you well.
To enhance the ability of English skills for our school students; we want to organize an English speech contest in August.

We are looking for contest judges. We will really appreciate it if you can be a judge for this contest. It will show that our school is a culturally integrated school. We are waiting for your answer; please fill out the following answer sheet:
1) Which weekend in August are you available?
2) Whether you can help us to prepare the contest topic?

Best wishes,
Liming

physical condition suggestion 2014
Dear President Wang,

I am a student from class 5 grade 3, I love sports very much. I want to give two suggestions to enhance our physical condition.

First, I think we need more kinds of PE classes.
There are few kinds of sports classes in our current curriculum. I understand that more time has been added to Chinese and math classes, because higher scores can help us apply to a better high school. But we also need relaxing time. Because children who can play well , can also learn well.

Furthermore, If PE teachers can help us make a physical condition plan according to our current needs, it will be great. Once the plan is done, maybe we can enhance teamwork and leadership skills.

I will be very happy and grateful if my suggestions can be accepted. Thank you so much.

Best wishes,
Liming