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Last week,we had a holiday,so we took a trip
with our family.We went to a small island:Dong Shan island.
First,we took the train and used about 5 hours got to Fu Zhou.Then we went on by a car and used about 7 hours to got to the Dong Shan island.It was a long time on the road.
In that holiday,we had a good rest.
The children played with themselves.The parents went to the supermarket to bought the fresh seafood and made a big meal!
In this island,there have many fresh seafood and there are very cheap.
Also,they are all delicious too.

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Last week we had a holiday, so we took a trip with our family. We went to a small island called Dong Shan island.
First, we took the train and used about 5 hours got to Fu Zhou. Then we went on by a car and used drove about 7 hours to get to the Dong Shan island. It was a long time on the road.
During that holiday we had a good rest.
The children played together. The parents went to the supermarket to buy the fresh seafood and made a big meal!
On this island, there have is a lot of fresh seafood and it is very cheap.
Also, it’s all delicious too.