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Your Original Email

Dear All,

Today I inspected at the branch of Xiamen CITY SPARK — Quanzhou Bohai Handbag & Finery Co., Ltd

Factory have only produced about 5000pcs sport bags and about 1000pcs backpack, all goods have not been packed into cartons yet. the waterproof bag of backpack was not readied at present.

Sport bags main defects:

1, Bags( inner of bags) with uncutted threads

2, The inner of side pocket only stitched one thread, but the inner of side pocket of signed sample was stitched two threads

3, Inside of bag, the webbing joint without back stitching

4, The joint at shoulder strap holder is too ugly

5, There have colour deviation with bottom wards compared with signed sample due to the bottom wards with transparent coating,

Backpacks main defects:

1, Bags( inner of bags) with uncutted threads

2, Inside of bag, the webbing joint without back stitching

3, There have colour deviation with back wards compared with signed sample due to the back wards with transparent coating, factory expained the wards with coating will not easy to lose colour while using.

Your Edited Email

Dear All,

Today I inspected at the Xiamen branch of CITY SPARK — Quanzhou Bohai Handbag & Finery Co., Ltd

The Factory has only produced about 5000pcs sport bags and about 1000pcs backpacks, all goods have not been packed into cartons yet. the waterproof bag of backpack was not currently ready.

Sport bags main defects:

1, Bags( lining of bags) with uncut threads

2, The lining of the side pocket only stitched with one thread, but the lining of the side pocket of signed sample was stitched two threads

3, Inside of bag, the webbing joint without back stitching

4, The joint at shoulder strap holder is too ugly

5, There are colour deviations with bottom wards compared with signed sample due to the bottom wards with transparent coating

Backpacks main defects:

1, Bags( lining of bags) with uncut threads

2, Inside of bag, the webbing joint without back stitching

3, There are colour deviations with back wards compared with signed sample due to the back wards with transparent coating, factory explained the wards with coating will not easily lose colour during use.

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