Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email:

Could you help me tweak my glitch bike?
– Sorry. I’m working on drafting my presentation.
– You wanna play hardball? I’m game. I will not help you set those animation effect for your presentation and I will not back you up in tomorrow’s speech voting session.
– All right. Look, my schedule is really tight, but I will help you with your bike in 3 hours. And you are gonna treat me lunch tomorrow, deal?
– Ok, power lunch. Deal!

Your Corrected Email:

Could you help me tweak my glitch bike?   (What is a glitch bike?)
– Sorry. I’m working on an outline for my presentation.
– You wanna play hardball? I’m game. I will not help you with those animation effects for your presentation and I will not back you up in tomorrow’s speech during the vote.
– All right. Look, my schedule is really tight, but I can squeeze you in about 3 hours later. Only if you treat me to lunch tomorrow, deal?
– Ok, power lunch. Deal!