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Your Original Email

today is my last day in CTS(company name).
i am veru glad to leave here.
this work made me unhappy for ony year,
because my colleagues almost not friendly,
and the work enviroment made people to angry each other,
i always complainted with pangpang about this work. and my condition is bad than before.
i find i am losing myself.
i considered for a long time then i sent lettrt(ci zhi xin) to my leader.

i think happy and health is the most important things in my life.

next monday, i will go to PIL(new company)
the office is near my home. just cost 20 minutes, i am very like this point.
and the interview process let me feel well.
and i reached internet to find some useful information about this company，almost people said their colleagues is friendly and like help each other.

en…..write english also complex ….

Your Edited Email

Today is my last day at CTS(company name).
I’m very glad to leave here.
This job made me unhappy for a year,
because my almost all my colleagues are not friendly,
and the work environment made people easily angry with each other,
I always argued with pangpang about this work. And my condition is worse than before.
I find I am losing myself.
I considered it for a long time then I sent the letter(ci zhi xin) to my leader.

I think being happy and healthy is the most important thing in my life.

Next Monday, I will go to PIL(new company)
the office is near my home. it just takes 20 minutes to get there, I really like this point.
and the interview process made me feel well.
and I looked online to find some useful information about this company，almost all people said their colleagues are friendly and like to help each other.

en…..write english also complex ….

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