Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email:

Where are you off to?
–          I’m off to where we hit it off.
–          Don’t be ridiculous, it’s already 22:00.
–          I saw you made eyes at Marry, your first love this evening.
–          I know what you are thinking, but it’s not like that.
–          I don’t wanna string you along. If you still love her, I’ll let you go.
–          All right, look. She wanted me to set her up with Johnny who’s right behind me at that moment. So we communicated a little bit by body language. You don’t have to worry about anything.
–          I turned on you lately very often and I think I’ve already got on your nerves.
–          It’s true, but you apologized yesterday and I accepted it, remember?
–          Ok. I just can’t stand thinking of your leaving me.

Your Corrected Email:

Where are you off to?
–          I’m off to the place where we hit it off.
–          Don’t be ridiculous, it’s already 22:00.
–          I saw that you made eyes at Marry, your first love, this evening.
–          I know what you are thinking, but it’s not like that.
–          I don’t wanna hold you back. If you still love her, I’ll let you go.
–          All right, look. She wanted me to set her up with Johnny who was right behind me at that moment. So we communicated a little bit by body language. You don’t have to worry about anything.
–          I turned on you lately very often (What do you mean?)  and I think I’ve already got on your nerves.
–          It’s true, but you apologized yesterday and I forgave you, remember?
–          Ok. I just can’t stand the thought of you leaving me.