Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email

Dear Tony

Good morning.

I got the new job, let me introduce my new company: it is online company and their vision is to create a joyful lifestyle, which means is deliver the love by products. But we are different from the normal online company; we are not only selling products, we are also focusing on the mentally, functionally and physically feeling upgrade through products. So we are building company culture and operating it through APP tools, the purpose is trying to build a big community with same life taste people through this APP, and you can setup some relationship with people you admire each other.

Form products, we must have good design idea and have better quality requirement on material application and product appearance. It makes people have strong feeling that they want to have.

In order to provide the better experience feelings, We are planning big showroom and will opening soon at Magnolia Plaza in Shanghai.

Thanks
Candy

Your Edited Email

Dear Tony

Good morning.

I got the new job, let me introduce my new company: it is an online company and their vision is to create a joyful lifestyle. Which means they want to deliver love through their products. But we are different from the normal online company; we are not only selling products, we are also focusing on the mental, functional and physical feeling upgraded through products. So we are building company culture and operating it through APPs, the purpose is to try to build a big community with same life taste people enjoy through this APP, and you can build some relationships with people you admire.

Form products, we must have good design idea and have higher quality requirements on material application and product appearance. It makes people have a strong feeling that they want to have it.

In order to provide the better experience, We are planning on opening a big showroom and it will open soon at Magnolia Plaza in Shanghai.

Thanks
Candy