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Re-plan for my graduate examination

Since I had decided to prepare for graduate examination, it’s been 3 months. Chen had finished his first round review of MBA test, but I was not. These 3 months, I accomplished all the process of undergraduate graduation、painting and some work tasks, I just spent less time for graduate examination. Last night, I realized that I just have 6 months to review. I felt nervous, there are 4 subjects I should pass, including politics, English, sketching, oil painting.
Hence, this morning I reschedule for my plan and reinforce to my aspiration.

I got some feeling of strong willing. When I was a child, I admired some very powerful people.
At that time, I thought that it was a high level which I was hard to reach. In my now opinion, as long as I work and learn hard, I will become a strong person who is my ideal person in my mind.

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Re-plan for my graduate examination.

Since I decided to prepare for my graduate examination, it’s been 3 months. Chen finished his first round of MBA interviews, but I haven‘t. These 3 months, I accomplished all the process of undergraduate graduation、painting and some work tasks, I just spent less time on the graduate examination. Last night, I realized that I just have 6 months to review. I felt nervous, there are 4 subjects I need to pass, including politics, English, sketching and oil painting.
Hence, this morning I rescheduled my plan to reinforce my aspirations.

I have a strong will. When I was a child, I admired some very powerful people.
At that time, I thought that they were at a high level which was hard for me to reach. In my opinion now, as long as I work and learn hard, I will become a strong person.