Email Service Notes (Samara)

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My favourite book is Charlie IX,it is a set of large-scale original adventure novels
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This is a story of cracking passwords, tracking footprints, analytical reasoning, Mo duo, Yao Tingting, tiger sharks, Fu you, four young partners, fearless, one mystery after another, and the case.
When I was in the third, fourth and fifth grade, my little partner and I often discussed the truth of the case during the noon break, and even though few people had deduced it, we were still happy to reason.
Even l don’t read it now,l think l will never forget it.

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My favourite book is Charlie IX,it is a set of large-scale original adventure novels.

This is a story of cracking passwords, tracking footprints and analytical reasoning, Mo duo, Yao Tingting, tiger sharks, Fu you, four young fearless partners, one mystery after another, and the mystery case.
When I was in the third, fourth and fifth grade, my little partner / friend / class partner / little buddy and I often discussed the truth of the case during the noon break, and even though few people had deduced it, we were still happy to reason / talk about it.
Even though l don’t read it now, l don’t think I will ever forget it.

Great job, these stories sound exciting and interesting! 
– Samara