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Sri Lanka

if someone ask me which country I’ve gone to most impressed me, my answer will be Sri Lanka.

Sri Lanka is a beautiful tropical island country.

In my trip, the most impressive thing is the ” train travel”. I experienced taking a train cross the mountain and going alone the sea. I enjoyed the fresh air with “tea smell” in the mountain and the sea view while taking the train.

Also, because of the history of colonization, Sri Lanka blend western and local culture. People in Sri Lanka eat rice by hand, and they are used to drinking tea after a meal.

The blending of diverse culture is interesting and amazing, which is similar with Shanghai.

Last and foremost, that trip was my honeymoon, we spent an amazing time and left unforgettable memories on this trip and we will go there again.

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Sri Lanka

If someone asks me which country I’ve visited and that has impressed me the most, I answer Sri Lanka. It is a beautiful tropical island country.  The most impressive thing I’ve done during my trip was traveling by train. I took a train across the mountains and along the sea. I enjoyed the fresh air with the smell of tea in the mountains and the sea views from the train.

Also, because of the history of colonization, Sri Lanka blends western and local culture. People in Sri Lanka eat rice with their hands, and they are used to drinking tea after a meal.  The blending of diverse culture is interesting and amazing, which is similar to Shanghai.

Last but not least, that trip was my honeymoon and we had an amazing time. It has left unforgettable memories and we will hopefully go there again.