Email Service Notes (Raph)

Your Original Email

For my friend
Hey, guy, you don’t know you have helped a lot. You are funny, friendly, easy-going that everyone wants to make friends with you. You have introduced many friends to me,you have led me into a new social circle and you have taught me a lot. Without you I don’t know what I would be now. The first time I met you I didn’t expect to be a friend of you, for I had tried many times to make foreign friends before.But they were not interested. However, we did became friends. Being with you I always feel relaxed. When I am sad, you console me. When I am happy, you share my happiness.No matter where you will be in the future, I believe our friendship will always stay in Shanghai. Here I want to say: thank you, brother, my friend.

Your Edited Email

For my friend
Hey man! I am writing to tell you that, although you don’t know it, you have helped a lot. You are funny, friendly, easy-going and everyone wants to be friends with you. You have introduced many friends to me, which led me into a new social circle, and you have taught me a lot. Without you I don’t know what I would be now. The first time I met you I didn’t expect that we would become friends, for I had tried many times to make foreign friends before, but they were not interested. However, we did become friends. Being with you I always feel relaxed. When I am sad, you console me. When I am happy, you share that happiness with me. No matter where you will be in the future, I believe our friendship will always be here, so I want to say thank you, my brother, my friend.