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More than 200 killed in a series of blasts in Sri Lanka

The first-ever black hole photo revealed tonight, made a great surprise to human race.Because it’s the first time for people to capture the image of the Black hole, which was just existed in our minds for more than a century.The black hole’s silhouette is like a black patch surrounded with bright ring, although it is not clear enough but captivated people’s attention deeply.

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More than 200 killed in a series of blasts in Sri Lanka

The first-ever black hole photo was revealed tonight, made and it was / it came as a great surprise / revelation to the human race because it’s the first time for people to that anyone has captured the an image of the a Black hole. For more than a century, black holes have only which was just existed in our minds for more than a century.** The black hole’s silhouette is like a black patch surrounded with by a bright ring. Although it is not very clear enough but it still captivated people’s attention deeply.