Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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Dear Jesse,
It was great to talk to you yesterday. The evaluation for my English level was very helpful. Thanks a lot. Yesterday you asked me why I wanted to improve my English, in fact I don’t have a clear goal such as taking IELTS test or going abroad, etc. I just hope that I can use the language to communicate with other people and express my points of view clearly whenever I need it. One can never know what will happen in the future, so I need to get well prepared.
Yesterday you told me my problem is vocabulary, I was totally agreed with you. Could you give me some advice to improve my vocabulary, please? I have tried lots of ways to recite words such as reading vocabulary books and using words Apps, but the effects are not so good. The problem is that even I could remember the meaning of a word, I still could not recall it and use it when I spoke English, I would still use the word which I had learnt in high school. The other reason is these methods are so boring, they make me exhausted and sleepy.
Anyway, it’s lucky for me to find Smart English, I think the way you teach English may really help me find my weak points and improve my English. I’m looking forward to the future study.
Best regards,
Jill

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Dear Jesse,
It was great to talk to you yesterday. The evaluation of my English level was very helpful so thanks a lot. Yesterday you asked me why I wanted to improve my English, but in fact I don’t have a clear goal such as taking IELTS or going abroad, etc, I just hope that I can use the language to communicate with other people and to express my points of view clearly, whenever I need to. One can never know what will happen in the future, so I need to get well prepared.
Yesterday you told me my problem is vocabulary, which I totally agree with. Could you give me some advice on how to improve my vocabulary, please? I have tried lots of ways to learn words such as reading vocabulary books and using word Apps, but I have never found it to be effective. The problem is that even though I can remember the meaning of a word, I still cannot recall it and use it when I speak English, so I still use the words that I learned in high school. The other reason is these methods are so boring, so they make me exhausted and sleepy.
Anyway, it’s lucky for me that I found Smart English. I think the way you teach English may really help me find my weak points and improve my English and I’m looking forward to my future studies.

Best regards,
Jill