Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

Hi Karl

Hope this mail finds you well.
As you know the incoming group from Beijing Deep Blue Travel Agency will be arrive 4th- 6th Aug.
Ms. Candy who is the general manager of Deep Blue Travel Agency as well as the luxury market key influencer in Beijing will be visits to taking care of this group by herself.

And this is best opportunity to bring our AXIS to be the next “HOT” luxury leisure/family destination in the market.
Therefore, I believe your support to make this group succeed will be define AXIS to reposition successful in the luxury market.

Please let me know if you needs anything from me

Thank you

Melody

Your Edited Email

Hi Karl,

Hope this mail finds you well.
As you know the incoming group from Beijing Deep Blue Travel Agency will arrive between 4th- 6th Aug.
Ms. Candy, who is the general manager of Deep Blue Travel Agency as well as the luxury market key influencer in Beijing, will be visiting to taking care of this group by herself.

Furthermore, this is a great opportunity to bring our AXIS to be the next “HOT” luxury leisure/family destination on the market. Therefore, I trust in your support to make this group succeed and define AXIS to re-position successfully in the luxury market.

Please let me know if you need anything from me.

Thank you,

Melody