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I like many superhero,some of them from Marvel Comics like Spider-Man ,Iron Man,
Captain America,Black Widow and so on.
some of them from DC like Aquaman,
Superman,Batman,Harley Quinn and so on.My favourite superhero is Deadpool,
he originally a Canadian special forces soldier, he joined the X weapons program in order to cure himself who suffered from terminal illness.Although he is disfigured, I still like him very m
uch.
Because he’s funny.
He knows he’s in the comic world.
And he is very good.He has the ability to regenerate.
So I’m very like him.I think he isworthy of love,isn’t he?

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I like many superheros, including some from Marvel Comics like Spider-Man, Iron Man, Captain America, Black Widow and so on. Also some from DC like Aquaman, Superman, Batman, Harley Quinn and so on (etc). However, my favourite superhero is Deadpool. He is originally a Canadian special forces soldier, and joined the X weapons program in order to cure himself of a terminal illness. Although he is disfigured, I still like him very much / I’m still a big fan of his / I’m really into him mostly because he’s funny and he knows he’s in the comic world. He is very good and has the ability to regenerate. So, like him a lot. I think he is worthy of love, isn’t he? / don’t you?