Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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I like singing but I’m not good at it.
When it comes to how to define someone as a good singer, in my opinion, I have two things of two different level to measure.
First of them, as a singer, the ability of singing is the basic standard to value. Whether he or she hit the right notes during the rendition and not lip-synch, whether he or she has a wonderful voice and express strong emotion in a song, whether he or she has best-known works and it very easy to identify him or her, and so on.
Last of them, as a public figure, he or she has positive energy. they don’t do illegal things such as taking drugs. Moreover, he or she can delivery love or help people in need as he or she can.

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I like singing but I’m not good at it / I’m into singing but I’m not particularly good at it.
When it comes to how to define someone as a good singer, in my opinion, there are 2 different areas of differing levels to measure.
First of all, as a singer, the ability to sing is the basic standard to judge / take into consideration. Whether he or she hit the right notes during the rendition and didn’t lip-sync, whether he or she has a wonderful voice and expresses strong emotion while singing, whether he or she has any well-known works and how easy it is to identify them, and so on. / how much they stand out.
Last of all, as a public figure, they need to have positive energy / a positive vibe, not do illegal things such as taking drugs. Moreover, they should be able to give to charity or help people in need as much as possible.