Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

Today, it was the first workday of 2019. Also, it was seven day since my internship had ended and returned to my university from Shanghai to Daian. As usual, my alarm went off at 7:30 in the morning, but I didn’t hear it and I slept badly, so I waked up until about 9.30. Then I grabbed a shower and got dressed. I felt hungry when I finished everything. It is an awkward time, I ordered some food as my lunch. During the waiting time, I began doing my useless assignment, the teachers have given us the pattern and I ‘m not allowed to use my own way even our objective is same, just using a different form. Around 12, I finished the meal and took out the trash. In the afternoon, I took a bus to school to meet my teachers and solved an important problem affecting my graduation. It’s hard to figure out and I had taken a lot of time to communicate with teachers and staff on campus since last year. Because of my gap, my university has some problem with it. Until now, it has been settling. After that, I went back to my dorm, and I had a headache, so I took a nap. This was my day.

Your Edited Email

Today, it was the first workday of 2019 / Today was the first working day of 2019. Also, it has been seven days since my internship ended and I returned to university in Daian. As usual, my alarm went off at 7:30 in the morning, but I didn’t hear it and I slept badly, so I woke up at about 9.30 / so I didn’t wake up until about 9:30. Then I took a shower and got dressed. I felt hungry when I finished everything. It was an awkward time to have lunch so I ordered some food as my lunch. During the time I was waiting, I began doing my useless assignment. The teachers have given us a pattern and I ‘m not allowed to use my own way even if our objective is the same, just using a different form. Around 12, I finished the meal and took out the trash. In the afternoon, I took a bus to school to meet my teachers and solved an important problem affecting my graduation. It was hard to figure out and I have taken / spent a lot of time to communicate with the teachers and staff on campus since last year. Because of my gap year, my university has some problem with it. However, now it has been settled. After that, I went back to my dorm, and I had a headache, so I took a nap. This was my day.

grab – you can use this for things you get / receive.
eg. grab a coffee / grab some lunch