Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

let me talk about my girlfriend.
I have a lovely girl friend.
She is more different to me.
She likes to go shopping and eat deliours food.
Everytime when I saw her,she was eating or play the phone.
But I like her.
She is my best friend.
When I sad,she must become to with me,talk to me,and do something make me happy.
If I need help,she will be here.
So,I think real friends can be more differents with you,but when you need,she will be there.

Your Edited Email

let me talk about my girlfriend.
I have a lovely girlfriend who is very different to me. She likes to go shopping and eat delicious / yummy / tasty / good food. Every time I see her,she is eating or playing with her phone, but I like her – she is my best friend.
When I am sad, she always come to be with me, talk to me, and do something to make me happy.
If I need help, she will be there. So, I think real friends can be very different to you, but when you need them, they will be there.