Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

Dear SE,

Finally it goes to say goodbye with you.
Unconsciously, it has been one year for me to join in SmartEnglish. One year ago, I was a shame girl to speak English. I though my English wouldn’t be too bad but actually it was really sucks. So I decided to face my weakness and that’s why I could get the chance to know you guys who really gave my a huge support in English learning in the past one year. To some extend, I think you changed my life.
Honestly, I don’t think I am an effort student. Usually I didn’t review my notes after class. But I still can find the progress obviously. Through one year learning, I won’t feel stress when talking with others in English . I am not afraid of using English in my work whether in oral or writing.
I still remember when I joined in SE about 3 months, I went to LA for holiday with my family, and my parents felt so proud of me when I could handle everything in English.
5 months ago, I got a really great offer which I couldn’t imagine before since my poor English. Although it is really tough but I still feel happy to join this company and work with so many outstanding coworkers.
I want to say that SE is a great team and everyone of you are the best one. Thank you everyone and hope all of you will have an amazing future. You guys filled the ideal. For me, you are not a group of English teacher but the teachers of life. Thank you Jesse and Judy. Thank you Nemo, Raph, Jacob, Celeste, Tony and Lily. Hope we will keep in touch in the future and I will be back to see you again.

Your Edited Email

Dear SE,

Finally it comes to saying goodbye to you.
Without me even realising it, it has been one year since I joined SmartEnglish. One year ago, I was a girl who was too ashamed to speak English. I thought my English wouldn’t be too bad but actually it really sucked. So I decided to face my weakness and that’s why I was able to get the chance to know you guys who really gave me a huge amount of support in English learning in / over the past one year. To some extent, I think you changed my life.
Honestly, I don’t think I am a hard working student. Usually I didn’t review my notes after class but I still was able to find obvious progress. After one year of learning, I no longer feel stressed when talking with others in English and I am not afraid of using English in my work whether it is oral or written.
I still remember when I joined SE, after about 3 months, I went to LA for a holiday with my family, and my parents felt so proud of me when I could handle everything in English.
5 months ago, I got a really great offer which I couldn’t imagine before due to my poor English. Although it is really tough, I still feel happy to join this company and work with so many outstanding coworkers.
I want to say that SE is a great team and everyone of you are the best. Thank you everyone and hope all of you will have an amazing future. You guys are the ideal bunch. For me, you are not a group of English teacher but teachers of life. Thank you Jesse and Judy. Thank you Nemo, Raph, Jacob, Celeste, Tony and Lily. Hope we will keep in touch in the future and I will be back to see you again one day soon.

Thank YOU Ruby! For having the faith in us and sticking with us over this past year. It’s been really lovely getting to know you and watching you develop and succeed. I really hope your future is bright and full of success, and that you achieve everything you strive for. Congratulations on progressing from 9.25 all the way up to almost 15! Amazing!