Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email


A: I’ve just got promoted.
B: Congratulations!
A: I want to take this opportunity to say thank you. It’s you that show me to the ropes.
B: Don’t mention that. I’m so proud of you.
A: I always told myself that I couldn’t let you down and I made it. It’s you that always ask me to go that extra mile and never give up. I want to give thanks to you for all that you’ve done to me.
B: No big deal. Just keep the good works.
A: In all aspects of life, I see you as my model. Never ever give up.
B: You are awesome. Linda told me you are seeing someone. Please let the cat out of the bag.
A:Do you really want to know.
B: Of course.I’ll keep my mouth shut. Please me fill me in.
A: I’m seeing your ex-wife, Jeniffer. When I was your student back at the school, I told you I really liked her. Just as I said, I never ever give up anything.
B: What?
A: I guess you don’t mind.
B: Of course I mind! You scumbag! We have not divorced yet!

Your Edited Email


A: I’ve just got promoted.
B: Congratulations!
A: I want to take this opportunity to say thank you. It’s you that showed me the ropes.
B: Don’t mention it. I’m so proud of you.
A: I always told myself that I couldn’t let you down and I made it. It’s you that always asked me to go that extra mile and never give up. I want to give thanks to you for all that you’ve done for me.
B: No big deal. Just keep up the good work.
A: In all aspects of life, I see you as my role-model. Never ever give up.
B: You are awesome. Linda told me you are seeing someone. Please let the cat out of the bag.
A:Do you really want to know?
B: Of course. I’ll keep my mouth shut. Please me fill me in.
A: I’m seeing your ex-wife, Jennifer. When I was your student back in school, I told you I really liked her. Just as I said, I never ever give up on anything.
B: What?
A: I guess you don’t mind.
B: Of course I mind! You scumbag! We have not even divorced yet!